...or, the "what happened after Blake" that's sat in my mind since 1986...
BLAKE’S 7 501: "In The Company Of Madmen"
By EWEN CAMPION-CLARKE
1. MODEL SHOT -- SPACE
The foggy blue planet of Gauda Prime hangs in space, alone.
We zoom in on the planet. As we do so, we hear the
distorted, dreamlike sounds of a conversation.
TARRANT
(V/O, dist)
He’s sold us, Avon. All of us. Even
you.
AVON
(V/O, dist)
Is this true?
BLAKE
(V/O, dist)
Avon. It’s me. Blake.
2. EXT. GP FORESTS
The voices continue to be heard, strange and unreal as we
move through the woods. It is raining heavily, and mist
wafts between the trees. We move through the forest.
AVON
(V/O, dist)
Have you betrayed us? Have
you betrayed me?
BLAKE
(V/O, dist)
Tarrant doesn’t understand!
AVON
(V/O, dist)
Well, neither do I, Blake!
BLAKE
(V/O, dist)
I set all this up!!
AVON
(V/O, dist)
... yes...
3. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY (FLASHBACK)
Black and white to indicate it is a flashback. The dialog is
still distorted and while alarms are clearly going off, we
cannot hear it. To the left stands ROJ BLAKE and ARLEN. In
front of them stands KERR AVON holding a long plasma rifle,
aimed at BLAKE. Behind AVON stands VILA RESTAL, DEL TARRANT,
SOOLIN and DAYNA MELLANBY.
BLAKE
(dist)
Avon, I was waiting for you --
BLAKE steps forward toward AVON who raises the gun and fires
three times. BLAKE’s reactions are mixed into each other as
if the three shots are happening simultaneously. The effect
ends as, mortally wounded, BLAKE falls forward. He grabs
AVON’s shoulders stay upright, and stares blindly into
AVON’s horrified face.
BLAKE
(dist)
Avon...
BLAKE loses his hold and falls to the floor, lying on his
back, staring up at the ceiling, quite dead. Gunfire and
explosions are heard. Just over the cacophony:
TARRANT
(V/O, dist)
Avon!
AVON’s head snaps up, leaving his daze. We can now hear the
blaring alarms. He looks around and sees black-clad,
helmeted FEDERATION TROOPERS entering the gallery from the
various entrances. As they enter, they raise their guns to
train them onto AVON. He turns, seeing more and more
TROOPERS arrive, and sees all the others are lying lifeless
on the floor, all apparently dead. The TROOPERS are closing
in around him, guns aimed at his head. AVON turns a complete
circle. He is completely surrounded.
As the TROOPERS cautiously move even closer, AVON looks down
at BLAKE’s body. BLAKE stares sightlessly up at him. AVON
places his feet on either side of the corpse, standing over
him almost protectively. AVON finally lifts his head up once
more. The TROOPERS are a wall around him.
Suddenly, the alarm cuts out, leaving only the gentle whir
of the tracking systems in the room. AVON casually raises
his rifle. The TROOPERS tense. AVON, aiming his rifle at
head height, braces himself for the shot. An eerie smile
spreads across his face, then hardens into a grimace.
4. INT. GP CELL
Color and normal sound. We see a close up of AVON’s
impassive face as we hear a roar of different gunfires that
suddenly ends, leaving silence. He closes his eyes.
KORELL
(V/O)
You still haven’t tried to escape.
He opens his eyes again. We see AVON is lying on a bunk in a
square room, staring up at the ceiling. The bunk is the only
furniture, but the decor shows it is part of the GP base. On
the other side of room, KORRELL leans in the open doorway.
She is relaxed and calm, arms folded.
KORELL
It’s been seven days. The door is
open and I am unarmed. Most people
would at least attempted to escape
by now.
AVON doesn’t look at her as he speaks.
AVON
The trap is too obvious.
KORELL
Is it?
AVON
To run, you need somewhere to go.
KORELL
True. And you don’t seem to have
that possibility. At present.
AVON frowns slightly at this, but does not take his eyes
from the ceiling.
AVON
You have all the cards. You make
the move.
KORELL smiles at this.
KORELL
All right. Let’s talk about you.
You have had no thoughts of escape
for the past seven days. Why?
Because you are looking inwards.
For the second time in your life,
only the second time ever, you have
too much to think about.
AVON
Is that a diagnosis?
KORELL
No. Nor was it a question. You have
been living on a knife edge, just
avoiding death. You could stand the
constant pressure, but could you
stand the memories when they come
flooding back? The memories of the
people you trusted, perhaps?
AVON still does not look at her.
AVON
"People"?
KORELL
The people you trusted, the only
people you trusted in your entire
life. They betrayed you. Anna
Grant, for instance? You nearly
died for her as I understand it.
And she was an agent of Servalan.
Or maybe she was an agent for
someone else? After all, no one
knows. All we know is what she
wasn’t... she wasn’t loyal, she
wasn’t truthful, she wasn’t worthy
of your love. And she wasn’t dead.
AVON
She is now.
KORELL
And so is Blake. You admired him.
AVON rolls his eyes in vague amusement.
KORELL
You pretended to despise him, but
you must have agreed with him and
his purpose. You wouldn’t have
ended up on this planet for any
other reason. Would you?
AVON
Blake was a fool.
KORELL
But he was a fool that you knew. A
fool you thought you could predict.
You thought wrong. In the end, you
couldn’t be sure.
A long pause.
KORELL
Did Blake betray you?
AVON
Is that a question?
KORELL
This time? Yes. A real question.
AVON smiles.
AVON
It’s an interesting theory.
KORELL
Am I right?
AVON
It’s just a story.
KORELL
A true story?
AVON
More or less.
AVON levers himself upright, turning to sit on his bunk,
looking straight at KORELL for the first time.
AVON
What do you want, Korell?
KORELL
There’s no hurry. We’ll talk
tomorrow.
AVON’s voice holds a hint of desperation.
AVON
I’d like to tell you now.
KORELL studies him for a moment.
KORELL
Tomorrow.
She turns and leaves the cell. The door slides shut
smoothly, blocking the view of the corridor outside. AVON
sits, staring at the door. His expression changes to one of
satisfaction. He lies back down on the bunk.
AVON
Tomorrow.
5. MODEL SHOT -- SPACE
Servalan’s personal space craft is positioned in space.
Another, larger space ship is docked with it.
6. INT. SERVALAN’S SHIP -- FLIGHT DECK
Three MUTOIDS sit at the flight controls in the middle of
the deck. SERVALAN sits at her control console to left of
the flight deck. Before her stands ARLEN, now dressed in the
uniform of a trooper. She stands to attention, helmet under
her arm. A fourth MUTOID stands nearby.
SERVALAN
You were on the planet, Commander?
ARLEN
Yes, Commissioner.
SERVALAN
What were your orders there?
ARLEN
To remove the prisoners held in the
compound and return them to Earth.
SERVALAN is slightly surprised at this.
SERVALAN
Why Earth? Were these prisoners
particularly important?
ARLEN looks slightly awkward.
ARLEN
Commissioner...
SERVALAN
Yes, Captain?
ARLEN
For some time, the planet had been
used by enemies of the Federation.
We had them under close
surveillance and had infiltrated
the command structure.
SERVALAN
And what form did this command
structure take?
ARLEN
When Open Planet policy was
introduced, normal Federation laws
were abandoned, leading to a number
of criminals arriving to take
advantage. When the policy was
terminated, law enforcement
operations were set up to round up
and execute those criminals.
SERVALAN
So any criminal elements using the
planet as a gathering place would
already be being dealt with?
ARLEN
That is what seemed to be
happening. However, the rebels were
using the cover of one of the
bounty hunter operations to attract
other dissident elements to their
base. They would capture criminals
at large on the planet and, if
suitable, recruit them. They
falsified records so the criminals
would be listed as dead, while
keeping them at large to plan a
rebellion.
SERVALAN
And who was it that infiltrated
this underground organization?
ARLEN
Myself, Commissioner.
SERVALAN
You, Commander?
ARLEN
I ensured that the dissidents were
unaware the rest of my force was on
the planet. At my command, we
stormed the silo they were using as
a base. All the rebels were to be
rounded up, and those that resisted
were executed on the spot.
SERVALAN does not look impressed.
SERVALAN
"Rebels"?
ARLEN
Yes, Commissioner.
SERVALAN
And who were these... great
outlaws? That senior officers of
the Terran Federation had to rush
half way across the galaxy in order
to have them arrested?
ARLEN looks slightly smug.
ARLEN
The leader of the rebels,
Commissioner.
SERVALAN
Who was...?
ARLEN
Blake, Commissioner.
SERVALAN stares at ARLEN for a long moment.
SERVALAN
Roj Blake?
ARLEN
Yes, Commissioner. He was the major
political criminal on the
Federation’s wanted list for...
SERVALAN
Don’t tell me about Blake,
Commander. I know more about him
than you were ever told.
A pause. SERVALAN is much calmer now.
SERVALAN
Did you actually see him?
ARLEN
Yes, Commissioner. I spent much
time with him undercover. He was
one of the false bounty hunters
that captured me, believing me to
be a suitable ally.
SERVALAN
And was Blake taken captive?
ARLEN
Not exactly, Commissioner.
SERVALAN’s voice is like cut glass.
SERVALAN
Then what, "exactly", Commander?
ARLEN
Blake was shot repeatedly from very
close range as the troopers
arrived. I supervised
identification of the body. Roj
Blake is a dead man.
SERVALAN
He resisted arrest, then?
ARLEN
We didn’t shoot him, Commissioner.
He died before my men even entered
the silo. He was shot by one of his
rebel allies.
SERVALAN
Which ally?
ARLEN
His name is Kerr Avon,
Commissioner.
SERVALAN cannot hide her surprise.
SERVALAN
Avon?
7. INT. GP CELL
AVON lies on the bunk, seemingly asleep. There is a
scuffling noise from the closed door. Instantly, AVON opens
his eyes, wide awake. He sits up. He mutters to himself.
AVON
It seems I misjudged you, Korell.
He gets to his feet and crosses to the door, and presses
himself against the wall to the left of it, drawing his arm
up for a karate chop. The door slides open.
A TROOPER stands in the doorway. AVON’s expression shows his
surprise, but he still makes his move. Before the TROOPER
has stepped into the cell, AVON strikes him in the stomach.
Letting out a muffled groan of pain, the TROOPER falls
forward to the floor. AVON crouches down and slips his arm
around the neck of the TROOPER, getting him into a headlock.
AVON glances at the open door and the corridor beyond. No
one else. He tightens his grip on the TROOPER’s neck, as the
TROOPER instinctively tries to pull the arm away. AVON
tightens his grip further, but speaks quietly.
AVON
The wrong type of movement on your
part could have serious
consequences.
The TROOPER stops resisting, intimidated.
AVON
It would be helpful if we could
talk. Take off your helmet.
AVON slackens his grip, while still holding onto the
TROOPER, who gently pulls off his helmet to reveal a
familiar face underneath - albeit with a stubbly beard and a
look of terror in the eyes.
AVON
Vila.
VILA grimaces.
SOOLIN
(V/O)
Since you know who he is, you might
want to let him go.
AVON smiles and does so. We see a SECOND TROOPER standing in
the doorway, holding a sidearm aimed at AVON. VILA scrambles
away from AVON as far as he can.
AVON
Hello, Soolin.
Keeping AVON covered, SOOLIN takes off the helmet.
SOOLIN
It’s bad manners to threaten the
lives of those who’ve just freed
you from a Federation cell.
AVON
It was rather hard to tell who you
were through those uniforms.
Although I should have recognized
Vila.
VILA glares at AVON, annoyed.
VILA
Yes! You should have!
SOOLIN
You thought he was the usual
Federation thug?
AVON
He doesn’t quite have that
aggressive authority which is their
hallmark. As for you...
AVON starts to rise.
SOOLIN
Slowly, Avon.
AVON
I’m not the one with a gun.
SOOLIN
You’ve just demonstrated that
doesn’t count for much.
VILA
You also demonstrated how you’ve
turned into a homicidal maniac with
a tendency to kill people on your
own side!
AVON
I have nothing to gain from harming
either of you.
VILA
Very comforting. We rather got the
impression you wanted us all dead.
AVON
There are a number of locks between
here and the outside world. Vila
can open them quicker than the
average guard. And getting past the
guards is easier with a gunfighter
- especially the best there is.
SOOLIN
I’m flattered.
AVON
Don’t be.
VILA
Well, you don’t need to worry about
the locks between here and the
outside world, they’re all done.
AVON
What about the guards?
SOOLIN
We won’t be bumping into any.
AVON
You killed them all I suppose?
SOOLIN
No.
AVON
I doubt it was Vila who did it.
VILA
I didn’t have to kill anyone. This
place is deserted.
AVON
Deserted?
SOOLIN
There’s no one in this silo, except
you.
AVON is troubled. He doesn’t know how to react.
VILA
How did you scare them off, Avon?
Threaten to give a lecture to the
assembled masses on the subject of
your ego?
AVON
If I’d wanted them to leave, I
would have discussed yours for
maximum effect. Where are Dayna and
Tarrant?
SOOLIN
Not here. We’ve checked all the
cells.
AVON
Do you know if they’re still alive?
VILA
You mean you actually care? It
looked to me like you wanted us all
dead!
SOOLIN
Dead or alive, they’re nowhere in
this silo. At least not any more.
AVON
Unsurprising. It’s been a week.
VILA
A week since you unleashed
universal mayhem. And in all that
time there hasn’t been a single
ship landing or taking off.
AVON gets to his feet.
AVON
What were you doing out there in
the meantime? Counting trees? Or
drinking every drop of adrenaline
and soma within a radius of twenty
miles?
VILA stands as well.
VILA
And what the hell have you been
doing for the last seven days,
Avon? Playing patience?
AVON
I’ve been held prisoner.
SOOLIN
By whom? There’s no people here,
Avon. No guards, no Federation, no
ships...
VILA
No food.
AVON
What about Korell?
SOOLIN
And who might Korell be?
AVON
A civilian woman with long hair.
She was here, in this cell, one
hour ago!
SOOLIN and VILA exchange a glance.
VILA
Well. We haven’t seen her. Maybe
you’ve gone mad, Avon? Again, I
mean.
SOOLIN
Or maybe she was a ghost?
AVON turns to look sharply at SOOLIN.
AVON
Or maybe you are.
SOOLIN smiles knowingly at him.
8. INT. SERVALAN’S SHIP -- FLIGHT DECK
As before. ARLEN stands before SERVALAN.
SERVALAN
Commander Arlen, if your takeover
of Blake’s silo was such an
"unqualified success" why didn’t
you complete the roundup and
identification of the bodies
according to your orders?
ARLEN
It was at that point that we were
attacked, Commissioner.
SERVALAN
I see. By whom were you attacked?
ARLEN
The fighting had only just stopped
when there was a gas attack from
outside the compound. It was Aoline
97 which can maim instantly, and as
a standard precaution...
SERVALAN
You evacuated the silo right away?
ARLEN
Commissioner Sleer, by retreating
we were able to avoid the attackers
without further loss of men.
SERVALAN rises to her feet. ARLEN stays at attention, facing
the console even as SERVALAN moves from behind.
SERVALAN
You lost only five of your troopers
in the entire operation, Commander.
And because you didn’t lose a
sixth, that somehow is supposed to
justify you abandoning your
operation without even seeing your
opponents?
ARLEN
Commissioner, the security systems
inside the silo clearly showed it
was under attack from an
overwhelming force.
SERVALAN
Of course they did, you fool, you
were the overwhelming force!
ARLEN
The alarms were deactivated once we
had control and were inside.
SERVALAN
And did you ever wonder who these
mysterious attackers might be?
ARLEN
I assumed they were more rebels,
Commissioner. Reinforcements
summoned by Blake to protect the
silo perhaps?
SERVALAN moves behind ARLEN, who continues staring ahead -
the Comissioner’s voice drips with sarcasm.
SERVALAN
Yes, it’s just possible that was
the case.
ARLEN
Blake was dead and so were most of
his rebels - and since our primary
orders were to ensure Blake was
eliminated...
SERVALAN
And he was eliminated?
ARLEN
Yes, Commissioner.
SERVALAN returns to her seat.
SERVALAN
Then where is his body?
ARLEN
As I reported, Commissioner, we had
to evacuate and there was no
opportunity to return to the
silo...
SERVALAN
So the body is still presumably on
the planet?
ARLEN takes a breath to stop her biting back.
ARLEN
Yes, Commissioner.
SERVALAN
So there is no proof? Only your
word?
ARLEN
Commissioner Sleer...
SERVALAN glares at ARLEN.
SERVALAN
You may go, Commander.
ARLEN salutes and walks across the flight deck to the
airlock on the far right. SERVALAN addresses the attending
MUTOID, but doesn’t look at her.
SERVALAN
Call up information from Data
Central. Bring me a complete
analysis of the frontier planet
Gauda Prime.
MUTOID
Yes, Commissioner.
SERVALAN
And have it sifted for references
to "Blake", "Avon", "Orac",
"Scorpio" and "teleport".
9. INT. GP CELL
As before. AVON sits on the bunk. VILA in the corner. SOOLIN
in the doorway, still with her gun aimed at AVON. He has
been talking for a while.
AVON
For the past six days, the routine
never varied. Twice a day, Korell
would arrive here with food. She
would allow me to exercise up and
down the corridor, then attempt to
make conversation.
VILA
Is she pretty?
AVON blinks, distracted at the left-field question.
AVON
Yes.
VILA
Oh, well, what a surprise. We get
to starve in a beaten-up freighter
for six days, while Avon here gets
to be interrogated by a beautiful
woman - assuming you call this
luxury "interrogation"?
AVON
I call it "psychological warfare".
She was playing mind games with me.
She deliberately set up
contradictions of a prison with
only one unarmed guard, unlocked
doors, no security cameras in the
cell, no brutality, keeping me in
total ignorance of what was going
on... just waiting for me to crack.
SOOLIN
It’d be enough to drive you insane.
VILA
If you weren’t already.
AVON
I decided to pretend it was
working. At her next visit, when
she thought I was at my weakest and
could finally make me submit, I
could escape.
SOOLIN
What exactly did she want?
AVON
She wanted me to tell her where I
hid Orac.
SOOLIN
And she thought the best way to do
that was waiting until your
conscience got the better of you?
VILA
She sounds as mad as you are, Avon.
AVON
Speaking of irrational behavior, is
there any particular reason we’re
staying in this cell?
SOOLIN
Where else is there to go?
VILA
The outside world as you call it is
saturated. It’s the rainy season,
and rainy season means rain.
Non-stop endless rain...
AVON
Spare me the weather report.
VILA
It’s warm and dry in here.
AVON
What about the rest of the silo?
SOOLIN
There’s a price for you being
allowed to find out, Avon.
AVON
Which is?
VILA
We want Orac.
SOOLIN
It’s our one chance to get off GP
and we intend to take it.
AVON studies both of them carefully.
AVON
All right.
SOOLIN
And don’t think we’ve forgotten
what happened a week ago.
AVON doesn’t reply but gets to his feet.
10. INT. GP CORRIDOR
AVON emerges from the cell, followed by VILA and SOOLIN. He
looks left and right, then chooses left. They follow.
VILA
You don’t want directions?
AVON
I prefer to trust my own judgement.
SOOLIN
After all, when has it ever let you
down?
AVON’s expression hardens, but he says nothing. VILA and
SOOLIN do not see it.
AVON
If my route is different from
yours, anyone relying on me to
follow your directions will be
sorely disappointed.
VILA is offended at the implication.
VILA
You think this is a trap, don’t
you? That we’ve sold out.
AVON
It’s difficult to tell who you can
trust these days.
VILA
That’s just charming, that is.
Maybe starving outside would have
been the better option, maybe we
should have stayed out in the rain
for another week and died? Would we
be worthy of trust then?
AVON doesn’t reply but continues down the corridor.
SOOLIN
You’re wasting your breath, Vila.
11. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY
AVON emerges from one of the entrances to the right of the
gallery, stopping short in mild surprise at finding the
control centre so quickly. There is no sign of shootout that
took place; all the bodies are gone, and the systems hum and
titter to themselves.
Cautiously, AVON moves from the walkway into the lower area.
He approaches the patch of floor Blake died on. There isn’t
even a bloodstain. VILA and SOOLIN arrive. They watch as
AVON turns in a circle, repeating his actions in the last
episode.
12. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY (FLASHBACK)
Black and white. AVON turns in a circle, surrounded by
troopers. Interspersed we see AVON shooting a TECHNICIAN
attacking TARRANT, shooting KLYN, shooting BLAKE over and
over again. The dying BLAKE grabs hold of AVON. He speaks,
but we hear VILA’s voice overdubbed.
VILA
(V/O, dist)
Avon?
13. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY
As before. AVON is back in reality. VILA looks around the
gallery, sound gloomy and slightly afraid.
VILA
What happened here?
AVON
You tell me.
SOOLIN
We were lucky. We survived.
AVON doesn’t seem to know what she’s talking about.
AVON
"Survived"?
14. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY (FLASHBACK)
Black and white, voices distorted. The alarms are going off.
AVON is staring, catatonic, at BLAKE’s corpse on the floor.
VILA, SOOLIN, DAYNA and TARRANT stand beyond him. ARLEN is
covering them with her handgun. There is a distant
explosion.
ARLEN
(dist)
Be so kind as to drop your guns.
All of you.
VILA, SOOLIN and DAYNA toss their clip-guns to the floor.
ARLEN
(dist)
You and this nest of rebels are now
prisoners of the Federation. Your
friend Blake said he couldn’t tell
anymore who was Federation and who
wasn’t. He was right. He couldn’t.
TARRANT smiles at her.
TARRANT
(dist)
You’re a Federation agent?
ARLEN
(dist)
I’m a Federation officer.
Keeping his hands up, VILA ducks around AVON and moves
toward ARLEN talking reasonably.
VILA
(dist)
Oh, now, look, I’ve never been
against the Federation! I mean,
I’ve only ever been along for the
ride. I’m not even armed. You can’t
kill me! I’m completely harmless
and armless!
As he speaks, DAYNA ducks down and scoops up the nearest
clip-gun. Before she can aim it, ARLEN fires. DAYNA is flung
back against TARRANT and SOOLIN, dropping her gun.
Devastated, VILA turns and slams his fist down on ARLEN’s
hand, forcing her to drop the gun. His fist instantly swings
up into her face, knocking her backwards. As SOOLIN and
TARRANT lower DAYNA to the floor, VILA snatches up ARLEN’s
discarded gun. He glances at her unconscious body.
VILA
(dist)
Sorry.
He straightens up. A gunshot rings out, and VILA reels
backwards, letting go of the gun as he falls lifeless to the
floor. Behind him we now see a TROOPER standing on the
walkway, holding a smoking sidearm.
15. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY
As before. AVON turns to VILA.
AVON
And how exactly did you "survive"?
VILA
Instant reflexes. I was never shot.
AVON
You mean you hit the deck as soon
as the firing started?
VILA
Something like that. No point
hanging around being heroic. Not
twice in one day.
AVON
Was Dayna killed?
SOOLIN
She was injured. We didn’t get a
chance to see how badly.
16. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY (FLASHBACK)
Black and white. VILA is lying on his back beside ARLEN, a
stunned look on his face. His looks around, then he quickly
closes his eyes. Meanwhile, SOOLIN raises her reclaimed
clip-gun and fires. The TROOPER falls dead as TARRANT, now
also armed, heads up onto the walkway.
A second TROOPER breaks cover from the right side of the
gallery, behind the others. He raises his rifle and fires at
SOOLIN. Shocked, she spins, tumbles and falls to the floor
as TARRANT moves and shoots the TROOPER, who collapses.
SOOLIN is lying sprawled on the floor, clearly in a lot of
pain and unable to move. She struggles to keep a grip on her
clip-gun, but only manages to push it away.
17. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY
AVON looks down at the spot where SOOLIN fell.
AVON
You must have been very lucky to
survive a lethal charge.
VILA
Who said they weren’t using stun
guns?
AVON
Why would they bother? They had no
use for any of us alive, and they
weren’t even expecting us to be in
this silo in the first place.
SOOLIN
The blast didn’t strike me dead on,
it was still enough to put me down
and keep me there. Basic first aide
was enough to save me.
VILA
Maybe that was their plan? They
shoot everyone, pick the ones they
want to stay alive and let the rest
die. They would have wanted Blake
alive, might have got him too if
you hadn’t taken the initiative.
AVON
And who exactly gave you that
crucial medical aide, Soolin? The
Federation?
VILA
No, it was me.
AVON
And how did you manage to do that,
and escape without detection?
18. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY (FLASHBACK)
Black and white. AVON is still staring at BLAKE. TARRANT
shoots the TROOPER who shot SOOLIN, and runs down the steps
towards AVON. A third TROOPER emerges from the doorway
directly behind TARRANT.
TARRANT
(dist)
Avon --
The latest TROOPER raises his rifle and fires. TARRANT
jerks, grimaces, and crashes backwards onto the steps,
dropping his gun in the process. AVON looks up, startled at
the noise as the TROOPER trains the rifle on AVON. Another
alarm goes off as other TROOPERS arrive.
VILA peers through narrowed eyes as a TROOPER roughly steps
over him to close in on AVON. The thief’s hand falls to land
near Arlen’s discarded gun.
SOOLIN’s eyes are narrowed too, but on the point of passing
out. With difficulty, she tries to peer up at what is
happening, but cannot move.
AVON is now surrounded. The alarms cut out. VILA takes hold
of the gun. AVON raises his own rifle. SOOLIN closes her
eyes. AVON smiles, grimaces and fires.
A control panel directly in front of AVON takes the blast
and explodes in sparks. Instantly the lights flicker and
dim. AVON dives for the cover of Klyn’s console as the
TROOPERS start firing. Two of the TROOPERS are accidentally
blasted by their own side and collapse. The others look
around, confused in the gloom at AVON’s sudden
disappearance. VILA raises the gun and shoots the nearest
TROOPER in the back. The fall, letting off their own gun in
the process and yet another TROOPER falls.
As the remaining TROOPERS turn to see what is attacking
them, AVON emerges from behind the console and fires again.
A TROOPER collapses beside TARRANT’s body. VILA is crawling
along the floor for a side corridor. Running footsteps fill
the air as more TROOPERS head for the gallery. AVON rises
from under cover and shoots a TROOPER, then runs for the
walkway. The remaining TROOPER shoots at AVON but misses,
causing a small explosion off a pillar.
The lights finally flicker on to full strength as VILA ducks
and sprawls himself against the wall, as if he slumped there
after being shot. Three more TROOPERS enter, as AVON fires
again, then flees the gallery. The TROOPERS follow.
For a moment, the gallery is still. Vila opens his eyes to
see, just in front of him, SOOLIN struggling to get up,
obviously in pain. VILA scrambles over to her, gingerly
avoiding BLAKE’s corpse.
VILA
(dist)
Are you all right?
SOOLIN
(dist, in agony)
Do you really expect me to say
"yes"?
VILA
(dist)
Come on, let’s get moving and find
some place to hide!
SOOLIN
(dist)
What about the others?
VILA is about to reply when a TROOPER arrives from the far
left entrance. VILA quickly aims and fires the handgun, and
the TROOPER falls backwards. VILA turns back to SOOLIN.
VILA
(dist)
Come on, move!
He helps her up and they hobble past TARRANT further into
the base. Two more TROOPERS appear, spot the fugitives and
open fire. Luckily, VILA and SOOLIN are able to turn the
corner and escape the gunfire.
19. INT. GP CORRIDOR (FLASHBACK)
AVON runs down the corridor, to run into three TROOPERS
marching the other way. The stop as they see each other.
AVON aims at them, when a TROOPER right behind AVON raises
his rifle and uses it as club. Struck on the back of the
head, AVON cries out, drops his weapon and falls limply.
We fade to black before he hits the ground.
20. INT. GP TRACKING GALLERY
Fade up.
AVON
And when I regained consciousness I
was in that cell. Not long after I
met Korell for the first time. So
what happened to you after you
crawled away from the action?
VILA
The silo was a death trap. So we
got out of it first chance we got.
AVON
Between your stupidity and Soolin’s
injury, that is rather unlikely.
SOOLIN
Like I said, Avon. First aide. We
found a medical unit and patched
ourselves up. It didn’t take long
and then we managed to get out the
main hatch and out of the compound.
AVON
In the middle of a siege? Even more
unlikely. I doubt you’d even have
the time for Vila to break out.
VILA
What do you mean? I can open in
seconds what takes the
manufacturers four weeks! Even when
they have the key!
SOOLIN
Once we were outside, we looked for
shelter. The nearest ship was the
best bet. Once we were safe inside,
I switched the rear viewers on to
see what was happening.
AVON
What was happening?
VILA
Not a lot. It had started raining.
A few flyers on the far side of the
plantation.
AVON
Any idea who they where?
SOOLIN
No. They might have been
Federation. They might have been
Blake’s friends evacuating. They
might have been Tarrant and Dayna
for all we know.
VILA
After that, there was a freighter
take off, from the other side of
the compound, then... nothing.
SOOLIN
There was something else though.
AVON
What?
VILA
It’s nothing. And whatever it was,
it’s not here now.
AVON
And what was it?
SOOLIN
Hard to say. I think it might have
been some kind of space craft. It
was on the other side of the silo,
through the rain it was difficult
to work out any details.
AVON
Describe it, then.
VILA
It looked round. Sort of like a
sphere. And it was huge. It also
disappeared after a while and we
haven’t seen it since.
VILA leans on a railing, scowling.
VILA
Quiet as the grave.
AVON
Did you see any of the troopers
outside?
SOOLIN
Just corpses of them.
AVON
Were they all dead?
VILA
We didn’t ask them. Conversation is
never up to much when you’re dead.
It’s hard for them to explain
things. You might have noticed that
when you shot Blake.
AVON
So you didn’t see anyone alive. Did
you hear anything?
VILA
Hear anything? It was commando
country out there! Hundred of
bounty hunters across the planet,
armed to the teeth, shouting orders
at each other on the communications
channels! Then, after a while, they
just... stopped.
AVON
Then what?
SOOLIN
Then nothing. It all went silent.
AVON
That ship’s communicator, could it
have been faulty?
VILA
Equipment failure? We’re not
stupid, Avon, we checked for that.
It was working fine. And we double
checked.
SOOLIN
There wasn’t much else to do.
AVON turns away from them.
AVON
It doesn’t make sense.
VILA
I’ll tell you what doesn’t make
sense, Avon. What doesn’t make
sense is you blowing holes in the
one person who could have got us
out of the mess you got us into!
AVON ignores them. VILA’s arm shoots out and grabs AVON’s,
holding him in place. AVON doesn’t look at him.
VILA
We nearly died, Avon. For all we
know, Tarrant and Dayna are dead.
We have no ship, no friends and no
clue what’s going on. We’re worse
off than we were on Terminal and
surprise, surprise, look who dumped
us all in it!
AVON
He betrayed me, Vila.
SOOLIN
No. He didn’t.
AVON
He was...
VILA roughly pulls AVON around.
VILA
He was trying to explain to you
what was going on. This whole thing
was a cover for the rebels! He was
pretending to be a bounty hunter -
what else would he have been doing?
Just what did you expect him to be
doing on this crummy mudball?
AVON
Forgive me for not trusting the
judgement of a fourth class
reprobate with the intelligence of
a brick. What proof do you have
that Blake’s "rebellion" wasn’t a
lie to lure followers here for him
to betray?
VILA
Blake didn’t betray us!
AVON
Then where did the troopers come
from, Vila? Why did Tarrant say he
betrayed us? Why didn’t he explain?
SOOLIN
You shot him. Several times.
AVON
So would you, Soolin - or are we
supposed to follow a hired killer’s
moral high ground?
SOOLIN
We’re certainly not going to follow
yours, Avon. You’re more trouble
than you’re worth, and if anyone
betrayed us that day, it was you.
VILA
So do we shoot you, Avon? After
all, you’ve set a precedent.
AVON
Kill me and you never find Orac.
SOOLIN
And is that why you hid it from us
too, Avon? Just when exactly did we
betray you? What did we do for you
not to trust us?
VILA
He doesn’t trust anyone, does our
Avon. Why should he? It’s not like
he’s done a single damn thing in
his entire life to earn it.
VILA steps closer to AVON.
VILA
You know, I might have forgiven you
for shooting Blake. I might have
accepted you trying to throw me out
of an airlock. I’m not saying I
would have liked it, but I might
have come to terms with it. But you
thinking you were in the right,
that you were the innocent party in
all this? You don’t get to do that.
Not any more. No deal, Kerr Avon.
No deal. Understand this.
VILA speaks almost in a whisper.
VILA
You deserve to be betrayed.
AVON stares at him, and seems to start to speak for a
moment, but then stops. He turns and glares at Soolin.
AVON
Shall we go?
SOOLIN
In your own time. Preferably now.
To be continued....
Sunday, May 18, 2008
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4 comments:
This is really, really, really good.
Mostly I'm amazed at the way that you managed to write a credible scene depicted their survival from the massacre, which has been my biggest bugbear with the idea that Avon got out alright..
This is really, really, really good.
Really? It's amazing how much headspace I need to write this... I keep worrying I get the characters wrong, and I've already noticed a whacking great plot hole - Arlen says she only lost a few troopers, the ones shot before the cliffhanger, but Avon and Vila massacred plenty more!
Mostly I'm amazed at the way that you managed to write a credible scene depicted their survival from the massacre, which has been my biggest bugbear with the idea that Avon got out alright..
I think I went through every fan fic testing the best resolution. Of the options...
1) The troopers were actually Blake's men, who'd defeated Arlen's troopers (note Klyn asks for security to come to the tracking gallery before Avon blows a hole in her)
2) Servalan was in charge of the operation and ordered them alive
3) The troopers had their guns sabotaged by rebels, so they were only stun guns
4) Everyone was teleported to safety at the last second
5) Jenna somehow turns out to be alive and saves everyone in various complicated methods
Anyway, the rest of the ep will deal with the fallout of that rather intense scene betwixt Vila and Avon (how intense? Just typing it I became incredibly angry), as they find out what happened to Korrell and the troops. And then Servalan arrives. Possible cliffhanger ending.
Arlen says she only lost a few troopers, the ones shot before the cliffhanger, but Avon and Vila massacred plenty more!
Bah. Like Arlen can be trusted with anything...
1) The troopers were actually Blake's men, who'd defeated Arlen's troopers (note Klyn asks for security to come to the tracking gallery before Avon blows a hole in her)
Hmmm, seems like a bit of a cop-out, considering all their "we're going to fucking kill you, Avon" body language...
2) Servalan was in charge of the operation and ordered them alive
Reasonable in that she does suffer badly from Villainous Gloating Syndrome, but does contradict the rabid gunfire over the end credits.
3) The troopers had their guns sabotaged by rebels, so they were only stun guns
Severe cop-out, stretches credibility via audaciousness of plan.
4) Everyone was teleported to safety at the last second
Hey, I've read that one! Sort of depends on the context. I think in B7SP it ultimately worked, thought it involved a HELL of a lot of exposition.
5) Jenna somehow turns out to be alive and saves everyone in various complicated methods
Yeah, that sort of ties in with the last one. I still like to believe that Jenna's out there, fighting the good fight myself.
She never was the one for gung-ho rescues, though.
And then Servalan arrives.
Kill her, KIIIILLL HER!!!
Bah. Like Arlen can be trusted with anything...
Maybe. Her "I'M A FEDERATION OFFICER, MOFO!" suggests she takes it all very seriously...
Hmmm, seems like a bit of a cop-out, considering all their "we're going to fucking kill you, Avon" body language...
Awkward I know, but they head for the room and find their leader dead, Deva dead, and standing over him with a smoking gun is a nutter in biker leathers. The reason they don't shoot him straight away might be because Blake made sure his recruits never got trigger happy?
Reasonable in that she does suffer badly from Villainous Gloating Syndrome, but does contradict the rabid gunfire over the end credits.
And the fact she is busy on the other side of the galaxy at the time, trying to defeat the Alliance.
Severe cop-out, stretches credibility via audaciousness of plan.
Not quite as much as the "they use stun guns of their own free will".
Hey, I've read that one! Sort of depends on the context. I think in B7SP it ultimately worked, thought it involved a HELL of a lot of exposition.
Yes. But it's a surprisingly popular one, I can think of five stories that have used it.
Yeah, that sort of ties in with the last one. I still like to believe that Jenna's out there, fighting the good fight myself.
Well, Jenna never really struck me as the 'fight the good fight', more 'lust after guy fighting good fight', and Boucher says that Blake wasn't lying about Jenna dying. Which is kind of official.
She never was the one for gung-ho rescues, though.
True.
Kill her, KIIIILLL HER!!!
I dunno if I'm brave enough to do that, but if I ever do this hypothetical Season Five, she won't be hanging round like a bad smell...
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